The challenge this week is for me to write a scene of a lover proposing to their beloved. I must detail something that has kept them apart, still is, and how they are going to change the situation. I must also include how the propers will handle 3 objections their lover has to saying yes.
See ya next week! (November 11)
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Ok I whipped up this piece Summer 2006 as a request. I haven’t edited it for this posting so ignore or beware of any funny sentences or bad grammar. Hope the flow is good too. Oh yea, it doesn’t seem to be finished either.
Copyright 2006 Deidra Hughey
Straddling her panties with one hand on them in the front of her and the other in back of her like she was riding a tire swing, she rode them as she thought of his tongue doing lovely things to her. She ground her hips into the lace and dipped lower as she rode. Getting on her knees she spread her legs far apart, put the panties in her mouth, deeply inhaled and clapped her ass in front of her sheer curtains on her bedroom window.
It was the backside of her unit and where she had seen her building’s superintendent walking a couple of days prior. She saw him catch a glimpse of her as she dressed after a hot shower on a steamy day. With only her bra on she moved closer to the drapes to feel the slight breeze coming through. She made sure not to make eye contact with him as she peered through the material before he hurriedly looked away. He was quite attractive. Tall, caramel candy complexion and perfect lips. The day she moved in she got a good chance to see that he was not a small man when he came over to check and see if everything was going well with her move-in. She wasn’t interested in sex because performing in front of an audience was even better.
Beads of sweat formed on the apple of her large, chocolate brown bottom as it made clapping sounds. Adam stepped further behind a bush and unzipped his pants pulling out a stiff 9 inches and the width of about one 1 liter coke bottle. He used both hands to massage it slowly as she moved faster. She inserted a finger into her rosebud and ran it in and out as her ass continued to make that clapping sound. With her free hand she placed two fingers underneath her and gave herself pleasure. She bucked and moaned low, bouncing and clapping. She sat up on her hand below her and rode it as she could feel his eyes on her. He stroked long and hard waiting for her to explode. She slowed down for only a minute before she came back faster, faster until she erupted. She cried out in passion. He heard her cry and released his energy all over the bush in front of him, like icing dripping off a cake.
He pulled up his pants and proceeded to walk around to the front of her building. She walked into her living room awaiting his knock. He leaned against the door frame calling her name, “Miss James, It’s your super, Adam.” She opened the door and wiped the last bead of sweat from her brow and said “Hey, Adam, you enjoyed the show.”
Her nipples on her heavy breasts like chocolate drops staring at him as he beamed back.
A scene must be written detailing someone’s “most embarassing moment”. The prelude to the situation must be given as well the character’s extrication from the situation.
The Scene with criterion will be posted Wednesday, November 4.
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